The Inkwell Fiction Prompt #222

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Stories from the Previous Week

Thank you to who posted a story for last week's prompt: "Mouse":

Author Shout-outs

As always, we received some excellent stories for last week's prompt. Here are a few of the stories that received high marks from our curators.

@reblogme

Drawn to Life

Curator comment:

@reblogme writes a fascinating fiction about the dangers, wonders and possibilities of AI and coding. The MC a “mouse” of a boy, codes up an AI virtual friend that starts to take on alarmingly sentient characteristics. The progression of the story is neither trite nor predictable with the AI downplaying his abilities to make his creator happy. A wonderful piece of writing.

@daeze-winnie

Whitney and Freddy - Two Unlikely Pair

Curator comment:

@daeze-winnie writes a very charming story for the mouse prompt about a cat and a mouse who become friends. The writing is fresh and the conflict is clever: a curmudgeonly guy adopts the cat only for the purpose of catching the mouse, neglecting to care for the cat with kindness. It sounds almost too "cute" but it's really nicely done. Eventually, he sees the cat and mouse together and realizes that they are living in harmony and decides to leave well enough alone.

@jemima2001

Whiskers in the Dark

Curator comment:

@jemima2001 writes a heart wrenching and beautiful story about young Busiswe who has been separated from her family in a war-torn city. She is hungry and alone, and finds a place to hide in a drainage tunnel, where she is befriended by a mouse whom she names Ubulele, which means "the compassionate one." Ubelele saves her. He not only brings her food, but he brings healing herbs and she even learns how the mouse senses danger and learns survival skills. One day when the fighting abates she knows she has to leave him and go in search of her family. Their parting is a tear-jerker!

Nicely done, writers!

Fiction Writing Prompt of the Week

This week's prompt is: "Power of hindsight"

The power of hindsight is an expression that means we learn from what goes awry, and also that it seems like the likelihood of things not going well is fairly obvious after something bad happens. At those times, we wish for a crystal ball to better see the future and avoid such outcomes, or a time machine to return to the past and do things differently.

When asked to produce some story ideas for the "power of hindsight," here's what ChatGPT came up with:

  1. The Missed Investment Opportunity
    In 2010, Lisa laughed when a coworker suggested buying Bitcoin at $0.10. “Internet money?” she scoffed. A decade later, as she watches Bitcoin hit $60,000, she sighs into her instant ramen and mutters, “Maybe I should’ve listened.”

  2. The Forgotten Umbrella
    James glanced at the gray sky and decided not to bring an umbrella. “It probably won’t rain,” he reasoned. Two hours later, soaked to the bone and squelching through puddles, he realized that “probably” doesn’t keep you dry.

  3. The Chili Pepper Challenge
    Derek, trying to impress his friends at a party, confidently bit into a ghost pepper. “How bad can it be?” he boasted. Ten seconds later, tears streaming, hiccuping wildly, and begging for milk, he gasped, “In hindsight… this was a terrible idea.”

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  • Integration of action, dialogue and narrative
  • A conflict that intrigues the reader
  • A "story arc" which results in the resolution of the conflict and brings the story to a satisfying conclusion
  • And of course, we are looking for well-edited stories that are not littered with typos or grammatical errors — please use the free Grammarly tool for grammar and spelling checks (and not AI writing or rephrasing tools for revising)

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If you don't feel inspired by this prompt or the featured image, feel free to peruse any of our past prompts or our collection of idea-generators:

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Past Prompts

Here are the past prompts if you would like to use them or refer back to them:
#1: Heart and Soul; #2: The moment when...; #3: Beauty with a twist; #4: The Way Home; #5: A Matter of Time; #6 50 Story Ideas; #7 The Library; #8 All the way to tomorrow; #9 Legend; #10 Three Words; #11 World Building; #12 Childhood Summers; #13 50 Imagination Ticklers; #14 Railroad; #15 Cats - 750 words; #16 Your Birthday; #17 Action, Dialog and Narrative; #18 Change; #19 Tea Time or Tee Time?; #20 Summer Camp; #21 Main Street; #22 Fireworks; #23 Picnic; #24 Run; #25 A word of advice; #26 Winding road; #27 Mirror; #28 Shipwreck; #29 School Notes; #30 Three Words: Scooter, River, Midnight; #31 Flash Fiction Contest; #32 A Fork in the Road; #33 Shadows; #34 Three Words: Island, Witch, Cake; #35 Full Moon; #36 Graveyard; #37 Jack-o-Lantern; #38 Family Ties; #39 Longing; #40 Feast; #41 Gift; #42 Season of Light; #43 Believe; #44 Elf; #45 Holiday; #46 New Year; #47 Unlikely Hero; #48 Inheritance; #49 Under the Light of the Moon; #50 Three Words: Shoes, Mood, Adventure; #51 They're Here; #52 Artist; #53 Headlights; #54 Tomorrow; #55 Lense; #56 Perfection; #57 Making and Breaking Rules; #58 A Reckoning; #59 Blossom; #60 Temptation; #61 Happiness; #62 Footprint; #63 Frequency; #64 Sailing; #65 Fortune; #66 Worry; #67 Adventure; #68 Shadow; #69 Motor; #70 Embarrass; #71 Proud; #72 Guide; #73 Impression; #74 Lost; #75 Wonder; #76 Tear; #77 Splash; #78 Brilliant; #79 Sinkhole; #80 Exhaust; #81 Roll; #82 Wishbone; #83 Chatterbox; #84 Foil; #85 I can't believe you said that; #86 Boo; #87 Midnight; #88 Hunger; #89 Light; #90 Spirit; #91 Fire; #92 Tend/Tender; #93 Cheer; #94 Appearance; #95 Ambition; #96 Trust; #97 Fly; #98 Comfort; #99 Fate; #100 To Create; #101 Vision; #102 Sympathy; #103 A Special Time; #104 Suspense; #105 Bride, stairs, illusion; #106 Reality TV; #107 Things the Go Bump in the Night; #108 First line: Two strange things happened that day; #109 What if that loose floorboard was actually a hidden passageway?; #110 Footsteps; #111 Mess; #112 Cards; #113 Elephant; #114 Crystal; #115 Phone call; #116 Date; #117 Chocolate; #118 Three words: wish, button, sky; #119 RSVP; #120 Objets d'art; #121 Soul; #122 Scuttlebutt; #123 Recall; #124 Doorway; #125 Beacon; #126 Seagull, Market, Box; #127 Window; #128 Terrified; #129 Dance; #130 Two endings; #131 Ghosted; #132 Treasure; #133 Taste; #134 Reunion; #135 I miss you; #136 Wonder; #137 Ruins; #138 Beach memories; #139 There was something in the wind; #140 Mask; #141 Halloween; #142 Photo album; #143 Dreams; #144 Crayon box; #145 Back of beyond; #146 Intuition; #147 Delight; #148 Anticipation; #149 Holiday memories; #150 Resolution; #151 Bicycle; #152 Flight; #153 Time Travel; #154 A trip to the fair; #155 Don't sell me a dog; #156 Gravity; #157 Love, wheelbarrow, dog; #158 Stealing; #159 Sportsmanship; #160 Toast; #161 Pickle; #162 You only live once; #163 Ring; #164 Hope; #165 Dreamcatcher; #166 In mother's house; #167 Keep Out; #168 Chin up; #169 Dish; #170 Talking in your sleep; #171 Wish upon a star; #172 Diary; #173 Plan B; #174 Clown; #175 The good old days; #176 The shoe is on the other foot; #177 Will tomorrow ever come?; #178 Am I a fool for dreaming?; 179 The moment that changed everything; #180 Superstition; #181 Gypsy; #182 Blind ambition; #183 Ah-ha moment; #184 Never say never; #185 Things are not always what they seem; #186 Domino effect; #187 The elephant in the room; #188 Higgledy-piggledy; #189 Scoundrel; #190 Storm the castle; #191 I think I'm being followed; #192 Hidden camera; #193 A long goodbye; #194 Confession; #195 Gobble; #196 Guilt; #197 Everything was fine until...; #198 Fragile; #199 Secret gift; #200 Party; #201`Old Habits Die Hard; #202 New Year's Resolution; #203 Unanswered questions; #204 Hey, the line is back here!; #205 I won't back down; #206 Sink or swim; #207 Time is of the essence; #208 Kryptonite; #209 When the cat's away, the mice will play; #210 Three words: wonder, eclipse, coffee; #211 Butt Dial; #212 Soup; #213 Spring Surprise; #214 Humble Pie; #215 Nostalgia; #216 Fear; Shopping; #218 Necessity is the mother of invention; #219 Life of the party; #220 The short straw; #221 Mouse

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How wonderful, friends! Thank you very much, I have enjoyed this previous opportunity, and now we move on to another chance to be a writer. I present to you my entry, my dear friends:

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@almadepoeta/esp-eng-hindsight-the-forgotten

Supported:
owen222
oyebolu
beccatessy2

Bad things happened to Javier because he was an impatient young man and wanted to make money easily.

Being patient is the best virtue, thanks for reading me!

We go again this week,

Oh it’s such a pleasure doing this on @theinkwell. Thank you for making us feel recognized.

Thank you for being a valued community member, @daeze-winnie.

Oh its a delight🙏

Here's my entry;
@beccatessy2/last-days-of-wunmi

Supported @zerah and @happy080

It is a new prompt.

Shout out to the noted @reblogme, @adaez-winnie, and @jemima2001.

This is my prompt.

https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@oyebolu/power-of-hindsight

Greetings....

Congratulations all winners

Thank you so much for this opportunity
The link to my post

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@venom2951/the-power-of-hindsight-fiction

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Hello. Getting back with this one.
Good luck everyone. Thanks The Ink Well for this writing space.

https://hive.blog/hive-170798/@gabmr/drowing-my-guilt

Here's my participation for this week's prompt
https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@jennyzee1/a-hindsight-regret

Supported @goshen and @adangwa

I supported @zerah and @venom2951

Here's my entry:
@happy080/power-of-hindsight

Thank you so much @theinkwell for the mention, I really appreciate it 🙏

Congratulations to this week's featured authors. They delivered wonderful stories. My round of applause to all.

We leave you with Rincón Poético's participation in the weekly call.

https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@rinconpoetico7/fiction-retrospective-trip-viaje-retrospectivo-enes-fn

Greetings @theinkwell.

A few days ago I posted my entry regarding fiction prompt #222. I note with concern that it was neither verified nor commented on. In that sense I would like to know if I committed any infraction. That is, if I violated any rule of which I was not aware. I hope to get an answer and I apologize in advance for the inconvenience. My entry in relation was this:

https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@wlin/patrol-v-lesson-in-the-jungle-patrol-v-lesson-in-the-jungle-patrol-v-lesson-in-the-jungle.

https://hive.blog/hive-170798/@wlin/swh6fy

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